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The (Unofficial) Critique Thread

Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2019 4:34 pm
by Milk
I've decided that since there's no offical critique thread, i'd make one.
So, basically, you can post your art and another can come and critique it. Very simple.
There are some guidelines, however...
1. Do not give hateful or useless criticism (eg: THIS SUCKS!, "You can probably imorove this drawing a bit" but with no tips or advice.)
2. While praise is aloud, please mix some criticism into it as well!
3. Only quote 3 posts per post!
4. If the image above you is the one you are criticizing, i suggest pointing too it instead! (eg, ↑, ^)
5. Obviously, do not post NSFW art or art that does not belong to you.
6. You can only post art that doesn't belong to you if the person who created it knows you and you ask them and get approval. Proof must always be provided.
That's all the rules for now though.
By posting here you agree to follow these rules and agree that starting and continuing to violate them can and will result you in a ban from the thread.
That's all from me for right now, happy critiquing!

Re: The (Unofficial) Critique Thread

Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2019 11:09 pm
by Eve
So my problem here is with the legs.. I feel like I made the thighs too wide and the 'bottom half'(?) too skinny? opinions?
if you see anything else wrong with it lmk

Please help me :?
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Re: The (Unofficial) Critique Thread

Posted: Fri Feb 08, 2019 6:49 am
by Milk

I think that the art is good! I can see what you were trying to go for.
I actually think the leg proportions are fine. My gripe with the legs is that the legs are kind of facing eachother. Personally i think this would look more correct if the right foot was down.
I also think that the left arm looks kind of wonky. Maybe shorten that extra sweater tuft on that part?
Also, the hair looks kind of stuck on. Maybe remove some of the lining?
That's just my personal issues, other than that it lookd good!

Re: The (Unofficial) Critique Thread

Posted: Fri Feb 08, 2019 11:23 pm
by Eve
Thank you so much, I'll keep these tips in minds :)

Re: The (Unofficial) Critique Thread

Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2019 9:05 pm
by LiquidCake
Ooh a critique thread! I'm down :3 this is one of my most recent paintings- gf sticking her tongue out :) How can I improve the face specifically? (I know the scarf and hair need work, they had less effort put into them since i was doing a face study) Image